Endless Ocean

Endless Ocean

27 Jan 2010

Zoha's Imaginative Story

2 comments:

  1. I really liked the ending and how you used vocabulary, but maybe you could make it more interesting by adding more paragraghs.

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  2. Hi there Zoha,
    I'm David from the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama. I spend a lot of time on the water fish and playing. I like how you used your vocabulary and how you painted a picture with you story. Keep up the good work.

    David.
    http://davidmathisedm310.blogspot.com/

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