Endless Ocean

Endless Ocean

27 Jan 2010

Voice Thread!

Year 4 have been extremely busy this past week typing up their imaginative stories at home. It was all worth it though when we got to read each others and peer assess them during I.C.T. The children are very proud of their work and would love anyone that is reading our blog to leave a comment telling the children what you think they did really well and what they could work on to improve their writing skills.

We would also love parents to leave a comment after this post about what they think of this new technology/website.

Zoha's Imaginative Story

Naeem's Imaginative Story

Senna and Sharko's Scarey Adventure by Isabella


For the Parents:
What did you think of Isabella's story?

Waves and the Lost Mum by Eden


For the Parents:
Please leave 2 stars and a wish, what two things did she do really well and one thing that she could work on?

The Magical Anchor by Holly

Elliot's Imaginative Story